Please review http://www.uptowngirllingerie.com

uptowngirl · #1 (**permalink**) 06-25-2004, 05:05 PM

Any constructive criticism will be appreciated!

GSO · #2 (**permalink**) 06-25-2004, 05:53 PM

Hello uptowngirl,
I have a few suggestions for your site. I would change the color of your text on your main menu on the left side to red. Try to maintain consistancy throughout your site including headings. You use red on your first page, which I like but black on the other pages. If you repeat content the search engines will penalize your site's ranking. Overall I felt comfortable shopping in your site, it is very easy to navigate. You would make it easier for reviewers if you would include in your signature in your profile
http://www.uptowngirllingerie.com
to avoid copy and paste.

uptowngirl · #3 (**permalink**) 06-25-2004, 09:49 PM

Thanks for the input! But, I don't understand what you mean when you say the red. I don't have red on the front page or on any pages... ?

charms987 · #4 (**permalink**) 06-26-2004, 06:04 PM

Nice Yahoo store site. I would agree to do something with the links on the left side. something in contrast to your pink.

How are you on the search engines. Like our site, you may get points off for over using Plus Size! You might want to try www.webjective.com. I did a quick density scan on "plus size lingerie" and here are the results

Total:
There are 254 word(s) in the entire page
Frequency for the page = 45.333
Weighted Keyword Density for the page= 65.18%

seems high.

Also, you might want to rethink some of your links. now closely are they related to you? How long has the site been running? Your site is a PR2 and your shopping link page is a PR0.

Funny how a little knowledge is really dangerous. These are things others said of my site not two weeks ago! :)

Good luck,

Michael
Nipple Jewelry