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Submit Your Site For Review Need a fresh set of eyeballs to take a look at your site? Have a specific issue or question about some aspect of your layout, design or interface? This is the forum for you. When submitting your site, be sure to discuss what aspect you are looking for input on. Just posting a link with the word 'review' isn't appropriate.

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Old 06-25-2004, 03:08 PM
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could you please get into my web site and give me any valuable information about design, usability, and, in general, your opinion about it. My goals were to make a simple web site, with just all the information required by a person interested on it, and nothing else.
Many thanks in advance, all your opinnions will be taken into account.

Regards from Spain.
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Old 06-25-2004, 03:25 PM
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The opening page I would definitely change to a white background. The cyan clashes with the red type and dulls the other colors resulting in a dingy feel.
Maybe you should enlarge the logo even more, center it above the tex, and bring it all down from the top some.

On your "Why Mojacar" pages: Your sentences should not start with "Because", "Because", "Because"...Maybe you could use bullets or subtitles (see below) instead to emphasise the highlights.

Lastly, I'd suggest that you spread the photos around to keep the interst going. Often people shy away from large blocks of text and need to have enticements to keep them reading. Along this line, you could also think about a little font variation (an occasional bold or size change) for subtitles to help us quickly understand your major points.
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Old 06-25-2004, 04:38 PM
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Hi! I agree with designhead. Add some meta keywords The keyword meta tag is still used by many search engines.

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