Please Check out www.kidtimebooks.com

John M. Randazzo · #1 (**permalink**) 06-23-2004, 10:30 AM

Hello all!

I wondered if you could take a moment and review my website www.kidtimebooks.com - I have completely re-designed it from a real sort of disorganized prior page.

I am certainly new to creating, but think I am doing a good job? but want you the professionals to critique me, because ulimately I need SALES generated from my site. Any of your comments would be a + and I truly appreciate your time with looking!

Take care!

John M. Randazzo
www.kidtimebooks.com

Graf1771 · #2 (**permalink**) 06-23-2004, 10:53 AM

I loved my personalised story book as a kid :-)

I think your site is easy to use, it only took me two clicks to get to the ordering stage.

Quick loading as well.

There's nothing wrong with the site, and as you get more confident with designing on the web the overall look and feel will no doubt improve. It still looks slightly homepagey, but it's difficult to say exactly why!

Good luck with the business.

snowflakegirl · #3 (**permalink**) 06-24-2004, 12:17 AM

I think your site is well designed and informative.

Please consider reciprocal links with my site "Paper Snowflakes for Everyone." http://www.papersnowflakes.com

Pat

gsmanzi · #4 (**permalink**) 06-24-2004, 07:25 AM

Hi John! i'm glad to see you again. This version is the best of all.Nice, clean, works and loads well. Easy navigation. Only you must improve your SEO work.
You have low relevance keywords/contents. And don't forget, Warner bros. are my favourites!

Have a nice day!