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Originally Posted by snowflakegirl
Looks good but you're going to have to fix the statement:
"provides clients with an advertisng sevice who wish to sell or aquire establised businesses."
(This sounds like you're looking for clients that already have an advertising service)
It took me few minutes to figure out what you were tryng to say:
"Advertising service for clients who wish to sell or aquire established business."
Mayb this is why you don't have many listings - we're confused :-) Other than that it looks good.
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Thanks for your feed back.
You are first person to see the site and that's why there are no listings.
The listing you see are tests done by me.
I will take your advise on board.
thank you very much.