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Old 05-30-2004, 05:59 PM
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Hi!! I appreciate any comments to help me improve this website.
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Old 05-30-2004, 09:28 PM
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Nice clean compact look overall. I don't speak Spanish so a bit of it was hard to evaluate. I gather you do some design work. If so why no samples? The pale greay text on the front page is too pale for that much text it looks ok in other places but this is a lot of text (and small) to use this style. There should be a link to your home page on every page and/or the logo should link to the front page. On the table of plans and on the emails you use a serif font but I didn't see it used elsewhere. On the table of plans there should be a divider or spacing of some kind between rows as it's hard to follow left to right across one row. Best of luck to you.
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Old 05-30-2004, 10:01 PM
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Hi, great accuracy! you've hit in the target! thats all my doubts. Firts the pale gray fonts, the serifs fonts, and perhaps i'll build a table for the plans. About the samples, i'm going to add a portfolio in a few days. But theres a link to the home page in the bottom of all pages named "inicio" (thats means "start", but "Home" in spanish initialy means "house", so we preferred this word). But don't worry about your spanish, as you seen my english isn't enough good!!
Thanks for spend your time.
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My test software counted 25 graphics on the home page(of which 34 have no alt tags). File size is heavy for such a wordy looking site - comes in at 66KB which would take 18-19 seconds to download fully on a 56K modem. Spacer gifs and deprecated font tags in there too. Make more use of the powers of CSS and move your CSS out into an external style sheet. Looks OK and doesn't break on my system. Good luck with it! :)
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Old 05-31-2004, 12:42 PM
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I'am agree. I'll try it.
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Nice site, even though I don't speak spanish. Could be touched up a little though. The layout is nice, but the side column looks a little dated and does not reach the end of the page, at the bottom.

Flash graphic is nice but uses beveled effects to words that seems very dated. I particularly liked the "optomized for" at the top of the site.
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Old 05-31-2004, 03:52 PM
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Guillermo - I'm glad you appreciated my comments. I tried to do a good job. If you wouldn't mind and you have time I'd appreciate some comments on my site as well. Thanks.

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Old 06-01-2004, 02:02 PM
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Hi! thanks to all!!
I'm so glad.
Thanks again.
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Old 06-05-2004, 08:08 PM
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After reviewing some of the other replies to your site I will have to agree on a few.
1 the navigation links on the top should be a bit larger.
2 If you have MS excel you can very easily copy your
tables into a html format. Copy & Past..

I really like the entro.. thats really cool looking.
You have great potential,, over all nice site
I also didnt find any robots.txt file in you web directory,
ive done some re-search on Meta tage and robots
http://www.northwestisp.com/server.htm#meta
should help you...
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Old 06-06-2004, 07:58 PM
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Hi! That's right!. The older site had a table, certainly was easy to read, but don't look clean. Always i keep on mind to chage it. Using Excel isn't the best or easy way, because make some "dirty code".
But you're right. I must change it.

Thank!! and have a nice day!
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