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Old 05-30-2004, 01:24 AM
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I took all the last sugestions and please review it again and note the buttons now are easier to navigate throughout the site now,I added about 15 more buttons
and added them to all the pages on all three of my sites and tied them together.
Thanks,Kevin

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Old 05-30-2004, 01:37 AM
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There is an old saying 'Less is more'.
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Old 05-30-2004, 04:54 PM
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I agree with the previous poster. It's just way too much. Visually it's hard to look at. I might look for ways to develop some broader categories and let users drill down to the information they need.

Some specific tips -

Don't mix serf and sans serif fonts so much it can be done but unless you are a designer with good type experience it's not a good idea.

Your table cells don't line up along the categories.

The blue links against the blue background are more difficult to read than they would be against another color (e.g. a similar shade of green).

Don't use so many quote marks. In the text for Phishing Scams you have lots - most if not all are not necessary.

The privacy info section - the top ten list shouldn't be centered. Also your #1 reason sounds like a personal attack against specific individuals at a large company. It makes you sound childish. Use some spaces between punctuation and the next letter.

The about us page. extraneous > at the top. The paragraph in the middle is too large, Centered text should generally be reserved for headlines and captions not for body text it makes it hard to read.

Disclaimer same deal with the centered font, and the text is too small.

Read Stories is all messed up.

Dear Ebay. Are you more interested in making your personal gripe than sharing information? This actually carries out throuhout the site. It doesn't seem like you are trying to help people but rather get them to agree that EBay treated you badly.

I know this review has pretty much all negatives in it, and the forum directions say you should add something positve, but this is really awful. I'm not trying to be mean or negative but I thought you would want to know. Best of luck to you and best of luck to the animals that you are kind enough to help rescue.
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Old 05-30-2004, 05:26 PM
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That is how we learn,I am self taught and still learning.But the fact my gripe with eBay just fits in
together with helping people educate themselves.I am
a little childish as the income I lost on eBay did help
offset my costs of a good cause.People like you are why
I put my site up for review here.You said what you saw,
I know how to take constructive advice.Thanks for an
honest review and remember,I do read these reviews and
hope to learn from some of you who know much more than
I do.
Thanks,Kevin
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Old 05-31-2004, 11:10 AM
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Hi! this site it's not friendly for visitors. The main problem it's there's no navigation bar, there´s a lot of bigs buttons, and don't help. Make reaorganization. Keep some themes into another like sub-temes, a navigation bar with pull down menues can be the solutions
Good luck!.
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