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Old 05-28-2004, 09:08 PM
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Default http://www.aristapools.com

My latest design. Honest reviews welcome.

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Old 05-29-2004, 07:01 PM
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Nice overall my comments are all technical. The "Return to Gallery" links close the window. The find tile links link to non-existent pages (why not a custome 404 page? Also the link to ArtSpell moves you to what I presume is your site? If I were a business owner I would be opposed to that, it should open in a new window. Also the logo should link to the home page.Best of luck to you.
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Old 05-29-2004, 09:30 PM
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beautiful site... very professional... navigates easily and quickly...
your text information is superb!...
you have done a great job...
However, I would have the link to your own site open in a new window.. so that Arista's visitors does not leave the pool site.
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Old 05-29-2004, 11:13 PM
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Default Arista Pools

Not bad at all. It loads well in most browsers and it is possible to expand the text size, which is important in this site because of the amount of text, and that fact that you have dark green text on a green background, which can be hard to read for those with poor eyesight.

My quibble is the logo, which it a bit fussy. I would make the lettering simpler and make the 'Pool and Spa Inc' easier to read, with the use of greater contrast. I was also a bit puzzled by what I assume is the spa at the top. It isn't well enough defined. For a short while there I thought it was a misplaced dot for the 'i' in Arista.

You have a good idea with the iconic 'wave' design to the right. Your logo needs to be simplied to fit in with this more.
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Old 05-30-2004, 09:44 AM
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Thank you dinosf, info202 and spunkymungbeans for all your comments. Excellent suggestions -- things I never would have thought of. And I appreciate the tip about clicking Artspell and closing the customer site -- I'll fix that right away. Thanks.
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Old 05-30-2004, 12:15 PM
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You're welcome more than glad to do it. If you have a chance I'd appreciate you taking a gander at my site too. Thanks.

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