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Old 05-28-2004, 03:58 PM
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Default www.coralcalciumsupremeformula.com (not submitted yet)

this is a site I built for a small all-natural type phamaceutical company. its a basic page made by a noobie I guess. check the meta tags, keywords, and such for me please. this is one of my first sites to try and design ever. made in dreamweaver.
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Old 07-01-2004, 12:57 PM
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In my opinion, there is too much stuff on one page. Everything above the "Bob Barefoot's Coral" line would make a nice start page by itself. The text would need to be a little larger, but otherwise, there is a nice start page there. The rest of the page should be moved to a seperate page.

A few graphics would not hurt either. Something to break up all the harsh looking text. There should be a lighter feel to the page consiering the product that is being offered. You already have some of it there with the blue that you used on the left menu. Continue that idea through the rest of the site.

As far as meta tags:
You are using your Description ineffectively.
You are only using 65 characters when you can use up to 250. You are not using your keywords within your description effectively, you are using 2 of your keywords in your description, when you should use at least 3. You are using your keywords ineffectively. You are only using 160 characters when you can use up to 1000.

Hope this helps.

Good luck.
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