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Submit Your Site For Review Need a fresh set of eyeballs to take a look at your site? Have a specific issue or question about some aspect of your layout, design or interface? This is the forum for you. When submitting your site, be sure to discuss what aspect you are looking for input on. Just posting a link with the word 'review' isn't appropriate.

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Old 05-19-2004, 12:06 PM
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Default Please Review - www.shaddowdomain.com

I have had my site at www.shaddowdomain.com reviewed before a while back, and was told the it looked like a geocities site (ick), so I'm in the process of re-vamping the site. The fonts and layout on the home page and "new stuff" are indicative of the direction that I'm going with the updates. If you could just give me some ideas on what's working and what's not working with my site, I would really appreciate it.

Thanks so much!
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Old 05-19-2004, 04:21 PM
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Think lineraily (literary). Unless you are going for an artistic experiment with the website, keep everything lined up - the bleading left edge does absolutely nothing for the site.

So what is this site about. It's under construction, but where on the front page is there some sort of something telling me where I am and what am I doing there - do you sell things, are you a database resource.

Too much scrolling on the front page with too much negative space. If you want to keep all those "things" on there, put them in a nicely formatted table so I don't have to give my mouse wheel a heart attack.

Agains, think lines. Everything should be lined up, from the front page to the middle page. Take for example the new stuff page, everything looks great, but then, halfway down the page, things seemingly float back off to the left. Asthetically this is not pleasing. Line it up.

Finally your shopping mechanism is, well, in need of some major work. The only way I can see what I have in my shopping cart is to click on the buy now or check out link. I should be able to go back and forth between the two effortlessly, put a shopping cart or something (maybe a coffin for the ambiance) so I can check back and forth.

The graphics and colors nicely accent the theme, but everything else needs to be "lined up".
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Old 05-20-2004, 12:11 AM
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Thanks so much for the input! I do have a couple of questions. I'm going to fade the edge of the bricks so they don't have that solid edge, will that help with the aesthetics?

Also, the reason that everything is a little helter-skelter in the alignment area is because the table that includes the navigation pushes it aside until it gets to the end of the table and then it seeps back to the middle. I've never done a "style sheet". Would that help things stay aligned? Also, would a style sheet allow me to list the logo before the navigation so that the logo loads quicker?

Would one "What's in my Cart" link at the top of each page be sufficient? I definitely agree with the need to define my objective, but where would I put the other items on that home page if I were to move them?

Ok, that's more than enuf questions *whew*...

Thanks again for your help!

Jools
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Old 05-20-2004, 05:43 AM
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Default Tables

The easiest way to line everything up on a page is to either use .css and div (which can be time consuming if you haven't used it before).

Or, here's a great secret, using tables as a page layout device.

<table id="maintable" border="0px" cellpadding="0px" cellspacing="0px" width="100%">
<tr id="contentrow">
<td id="sidebar" valign="top" width="{whatever
width of table you want for the sidebar}">
**THIS IS WHERE YOU PUT YOUR SIDE BAR TABLE**
</td>
<td id="content" valigh="top">
**THIS IS WHERE YOU PUT EVERYTHING ELSE FROM THE
PAGE HERE**
</td>
</tr>
</table>

What this will do is create a table that the whole page will sit on, with the sidebar and everything nicely ligned up - all you would have to do then is make sure that the "bricks" line up with the edge of something (either a table, or something - to give it a sense of linearity).

As far as getting your logo to load faster, use a simple javascript preloader script:

place this in the header section of the page (between the <head>IN HERE SOMEWHERE</head> tags).

<script type="text/javascript">
<!-- Begin
imageheader = new Image();
imageheader.src = "sdlogored.gif";
// End -->
</script>

That or optimize it a bit (use a freeware program, a free site like: http://www.spinwave.com/crunchers.html, or if your image editor supports it, use that).

The view cart option should be on every page - there is more then enough room to add it to the sidebar (or on top of every page if you want, but since all the navigation items are on the side, you should put that there as well).

Right where it says Greetings and Welcome. Put something there to the effect that describes what the site is about (this is a store with ...., specializing in ..., etc...)

Finally, the items all the way down at the bottom of the page could be placed in a table. There looks like there is 15 items one after the other all the way down. Maybe make a table with 3 rows of 5? or a couple different tables - grouping the smaller items together or something.

Hope this helps.
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