I would appreciate any comments and suggestions on a website I recently designed and developed for a client of mine: www.ebsforan.com. This site was completed in one week from concept to launch, because this client had to go live in time for a t.v. ad. Seeing that I had limited time, I'm sure there are areas that I overlooked....suggestions as to how this site can be improved are welcome...now that I have time for "tweeking" it alittle! Thanks in advance! Dar90

I tried to review it but could not get it to load

Got a pair of them on the first page

Your home page content needs to be a lot more "catchy". You've got approx. 5 seconds to draw visitor's attention to the content of the site. When I entered it, there was no incentive for me to stay.

A good home page answers all of the "W" questions:

- who (is the site for),
- what (do you offer),
- where (your geographic area),
- when (if it is time-related, ie. an event)
- and why (why choose your services),

providing the visitor with useful information about your organization, product, service or event. If you look at your home page and it does not make you want to stay on the site, rewrite and redesign it.

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