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Submit Your Site For Review Need a fresh set of eyeballs to take a look at your site? Have a specific issue or question about some aspect of your layout, design or interface? This is the forum for you. When submitting your site, be sure to discuss what aspect you are looking for input on. Just posting a link with the word 'review' isn't appropriate.

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Old 05-06-2004, 01:44 AM
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Default www.mystorycard.com - greeting cards, photographic prints

We need help. Would some one give us some feedback on our site. We are new at this and are not sure if we are on the right track.

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Old 05-06-2004, 05:36 PM
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You're wasting your most valuable space with slogans. Where you have that stuff about being two women (frankly, as a customer, I don't care if you're 43 kangaroos), I would put a brief description of what you do and who your target audience is. Are you selling to retail outlets? Individuals? I couldn't tell. You have some explanation of what you do in tiny print, but I couldn't get the gist of it very easily. I gather you're selling something, but I don't know how I would go about buying it.

Sorry to be so negative. I'd put the beautiful picture of the baby's hands up top. It really gives the home page class.
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Old 05-07-2004, 04:06 AM
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I think you still need to combine your logo, your image, and then the description into one header.

I would also recommend that you use two columns to show your cards. As it is currently, it makes for a lot of scrolling on some pages. I view at 1600 x 1200 so I cannot imagine what the 800 x 600 folks are going through.

In addition, I peeked at your code and noticed that your tables are only set to 583 in width. I think you can bump it up to 640 (what are the maxes for 800x600? someone here will know the exact number) which will provide you with a bit more room to maneuver.

Best of luck!
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