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Old 05-01-2004, 11:22 AM
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Hi Folks,
A new web development site needs your valuable feedback and suggestions to make it more effective. http://www.icreon.net
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Old 05-01-2004, 02:00 PM
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web-centric marketing and assessment solution to be used by Igenti’s clients for performance enhancing their retail businesses through innovative e-enabled marketing ideas.
Lighten up on the buzzwords, and list benefits. Performance enhancing?!?! Any business person conscious through the last decade should consider it a career-saving move to run from this. Run the text through a validator which checks content for information value. Your benefits list is, actually, a features list.

Business Process Automation
E-Commerce
E-Learning
ERP
Knowledge Management
Migration Services
Quality Assurance
Software Development
Website Development
Wireless & Mobile Solutions

Technologies in search of problems, not even features. I have not the faintest idea what the intersection of X and Y represent on your matrix. If I sat your prime intended customers down in front of this and asked them, you'd be much more than surprised at what they could come up with.

Migration? ...Ask "Who Cares?" This is not a slight, but a mechanism for getting to the crux of why users buy what you're selling. (By the way, what are you selling?) A tagline -- in plain English -- would be so nice. Do you migrate users eight percent more cheaply than [insert national study here], with twelve percent lower training costs [insert well researched mean here] due to your dedicated interaction design expertise and user testing?

Apparently not.

Content is the thing keeping the SE terms from all running together here. Take a lesson from the bubble economy and de-technobabble the site. Replace the matrix with something you can user test for actual communications value (information). Very good for those nostalgic for the 90's.
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Old 05-01-2004, 02:44 PM
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daxesh,

There's a couple of things I would improve on. I will say though, it is a very clean site and I like the look of it.

1) Your "Drop down menu" looks a little out of place. I would suggest keeping the same format as your "side header" (the grey line). This different, yellow line, throws everything else.

2) Your front page is wayyyyyy too busy. It's not appealing to read and has no sense of direction. I would suggest clearing it up a little more and spacing everything out so that it attracks someones attention to certain points of your page.

Other than that, great job.

Good Luck
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Old 05-03-2004, 06:22 AM
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Hi,
Yeah I agree with you that there is scope for further improving content. As regards to graph headings are very clearly mentioned near X Y axis. I also need to know usability analysis.

Any suggestions ???
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Old 05-03-2004, 09:00 AM
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Usability of the content is the first thing to work on. It is admirable to try saving money. But an analysis suggests there be observation of users, in the proper setting. Contrary to popular opinion, you don't get a usability analysis from a post in a forum. You get what few comments time allows.

Otherwise any recommendations could get little consideration and less action.
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