Hello I posted in the other forum for website review and got a lot of good feedback. Nobody liked my logo, especially me, so I revised it today and could use your advice. Thanks in advance for your time.

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I think it is too busy. Simplify it.

There is too much going on. It looks like you just copied and pasted from google images. It needs a lot of refining to look like a professional logo.

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It's just plain bad.

Websites rely heavily on branding. I'd recommend that you hire a logo designer, it'll be worth it.

They're cheap enough and easy enough to find.

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i think it's too plain. it looks like you've designed it using Microsoft word and paint

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Actually, I used publisher. I what way is it plain? everybody else thinks it is too busy.

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No good. You need to know your strengths and weaknesses, and logo design is not a strength.

Hire someone to do it. It'll be worth it.

[edit] Okay, I'll go into why I don't like it:

It has ZERO focus. It just doesn't make sense. What does a flag/map of America have to do with self defense? The sunburst?

The text block is crooked too.

Develop something you feel sums up what it is you do. Whether it's security, empowerment, confidence, whatever, just use that to develop something sensible.

THEN, take your idea to a designer who can make it look good.

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Sage advice Ran. Thanks for taking the time to expand and clarify my reply (posted above).

Rep comin' your way.

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The logo is unreadable, too much design and over decorated...

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to much design there and also not finished work clarity is very bad. also text not readable. nothing special in logo. I think you must have to create new one.

It would be a great idea to hire a logo design specialist