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Old 02-23-2009, 09:28 AM
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here is my first adobe illustrator draft logo

i used it to creat my logo a few years ago

I made a background like carpet and i added pens and a brush to make special effects on the letters G and S


I made it long time and I didn't make any changes since then

I feel that i must different colors for letters and backgrounds

I changed the letters to victors so that i can manipulate them to have the arc shape i want for them '


I could find anyone who can give me stuff to train on so i only did 2 logos

please comment on my first adobe illustrator draft logo and send me tips to make it better

Thanks
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Old 02-23-2009, 10:44 AM
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Too busy.

The brushes are difficult to see as the image is reduced in size.

Maybe use one brush laid horizontally across the image beneath "Graphics".

The crosshatched background is distracting and makes the image difficult to read.
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I thought the company name was Ghawash
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Default Re: my adobe illustrator draft logo

thanks what to do

to make it better
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Old 02-24-2009, 05:52 AM
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Default Re: my adobe illustrator draft logo

Thanks alot

The idea of my logo

is the backgrounf is like a a carpet and their is a pen and brush to pain on it

Hawash Graphics

The brush come from letter G and the pen from letter S

i may use better colors
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