Body Jewelry Head Banner

nipplecharms1 · #1 (**permalink**) 03-09-2008, 11:34 AM

Hi gang,

In advance I want to thank everyone that looks and gives us a comment.

Here is the new banner we want to use at the top of our site. Its got a watermark "draft" in it so please look past that.

We are a non piercing body jewelry site and we are looking for a "hotter" but "classy" look. We are trying appeal to both male and female buyers. You can review the site separately if you like but here we are trying to get feedback, positive and negative, on this design.

Oh, and the design is in development from one of our own...
http://www.webproworld.com/members/parallelworlds.html

http://yodadrive.mypsh.com/drives/pa...mssmdrknon.jpg

He has done a few things for us and for many other here at WPW. He is very good.

Thanks all.

Michael

PS, please do not visit our site if some nudity offends you or your community. Our mouthpiece makes us say that!

**crankydave** · #2 (**permalink**) 03-09-2008, 04:07 PM

Hey Michael!

Personally, I like the logo.

In addition, I'd like to see your tag line incorporated. Only my opinion, but something like...

All pleasure, No pain

Additionally, the graphic on the right side is, really undiscernable. Noone will likely be able to tell what it's supposed to be. Use something that is sharp and crisp, if at all. If you choose to use a product in your logo, I assume it's a product, make sure you make it clear that's what it is.

You're marketing a niche. Appeal to that specific niche, even in your logo.

Dave

Vitaly · #3 (**permalink**) 03-10-2008, 01:23 AM

Hi Michael,

I like it but I don't like the font of the text under the logo.

Good luck,
Vitaly.

nipplecharms1 · #4 (**permalink**) 03-13-2008, 11:49 AM

Thanks All. I implemented the new banner. Added a few things. Hope this looks better for sale!

Michael

bcdxer · #5 (**permalink**) 05-06-2008, 07:32 PM

nice logo