I like it but I think you can do a few things to improve it.
The thinking bubble over their heads looks a little too much like a dark cloud. There should be at least 2 little circles off of each parents head to make it more like their thoughts. And maybe the bubble could just have a heart in it (if that's not too corny) or at least be lighter so that they don't look depressed.
Also, You could lengthen/enlarge "Thinking Parent" so that it fills the space a little better. Then maybe the little girl might move to the right, mom to the left, so that they fit the outline of the type nicely.
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