Last "Maa's" Logo

parallelworlds · #1 (**permalink**) 08-24-2003, 06:09 AM

OK... the logos:

The last logo was the first go around. The second logo was my second go around, and the first logo is what i think will be the final... any last minute thoughts and or comments?

thanks again
anthony

Reesa Marchetti · #2 (**permalink**) 08-25-2003, 05:22 PM

Hi,

I like the idea of your new logo; definitely an improvement over the old one. However, the graphic seems a bit too large for me — and I question whether an "old-fashioned" phone on top of the world is the best image for you. What if instead of that, an assortment of cell phones, etc. took its place?

And perhaps a line drawing instead of such a heavy graphic?

I'm really just getting into the importance of logo design myself, so hopefully you'll get a lot more replies. I found that was the best help for me: varying opinions!

grease · #3 (**permalink**) 08-25-2003, 11:50 PM

Your composition is excellent. This is the start of a great Ad, but does not work well as a logo. You really need to think more 'iconic.' A powerful, memorable and versatile logo is much more simple. You can defintely convey the same message with a slick vector graphic.

Grease

parallelworlds · #4 (**permalink**) 08-26-2003, 02:03 PM

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grease · #5 (**permalink**) 08-26-2003, 03:52 PM

Anthony,

Try bringing your 'Telecom' letters a little tighter or decrease horizontal transformation. Also your cord looks a bit sketchy...you may want to clean up the edges a bit to give a crisp look.

grease

parallelworlds · #6 (**permalink**) 08-26-2003, 04:55 PM

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grease · #7 (**permalink**) 08-26-2003, 06:24 PM

Looks better to me :)

Reesa Marchetti · #8 (**permalink**) 08-26-2003, 09:29 PM

Clear, concise. Much better. Maybe you want to try a few more variations.

netcastles · #9 (**permalink**) 08-26-2003, 09:52 PM

I like it, but it should be more iconic. Basic shapes and lines are in for logos.
I like the old phone, it has an old-fashioned service implication. Old fashioned customer service, new world product.