Hi Karen, thought I would throw in my two cents, since I recall the previous examples. Much better, is my general response.
There does appear to be some instance of pixels (as opposed to smoothing antialias) in there looking a bit jagged, which you might soften enough to, for example, have the thread on the spindle/spool look unbroken.
And if I had to make some sort of "what would I also try to see how it looks" comment, I would think you might want to put the spool on the left, reverse (flip) along the vertical axis, and maybe tie (pun intended?) the thread off the top of your spool into the "Crazie" to give a bit more appearance of integration of clipart + text.
Looks much better though - hope to see the rest of your site reflecting this sort of progress, it'll be quite a step up from the Tripod account I looked at some week(s) ago...
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