Gillette Cooperative, LLC

megahertz28 · #1 (**permalink**) 09-09-2004, 06:41 PM

This is a logo I just finished for an online business I'm getting ready to kick off. I would appreciate ANY feedbak from the group. Thanks a bunch!
Tyler Gillette

www.topologies.net

Nitsirk · #2 (**permalink**) 09-10-2004, 06:35 PM

It's OK....but it just seems to be a little too cluttered. I would take out either the top line or the dotted line, but having both is too much. Actually I think the top line could really go. Good luck!

Eagle Imagery · #3 (**permalink**) 09-11-2004, 11:25 PM

Too busy me thinks! Try to cut down on some of the unnecessary elements - a good logo should be read, understood and remembered in a just a few seconds. :-)

megahertz28 · #4 (**permalink**) 10-01-2004, 07:07 PM

On your advice I've toned it down to

Is it better or worse? Thanks again!
Tyler
www.topologies.net

MarcieZoob · #5 (**permalink**) 10-10-2004, 09:12 AM

Still too cluttered!

I think you should get rid of the top line altogether since it takes away from the dotted line with the arrow.

Regarding the font, I think you've got too many serifs adding to the "busy" feel of the logo. The secondary text on line 2 might stand out more if it were a sans serif font, like Helvetica or Verdana.