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parallelworlds · #1 (**permalink**) 08-18-2004, 06:14 PM

Last one. Thanks for looking and for the comments. Remember to use the scroll bar on the left to navigate through different versions of the logo.

http://yodadrive.mypsh.com/drives/pa...lds/index.html

Thanks again,
Anthony

grease · #2 (**permalink**) 08-19-2004, 10:51 AM

Hi Anthony,
I think your logo needs a bit of work. It looks a tad too 'illustrative' as opposed to 'iconic'. Try thickening your lines, or using solid spaces to give a stronger first impression. Also you may like to tighten your who composition together. I am seeing three seperate elements - but i should be seeing a unified image.

Take Care,
Grease

parallelworlds · #3 (**permalink**) 08-19-2004, 10:59 AM

Which version did you like the best. I'll work from that version to try to tie it all together better.

Thanks in advance,
Anthony

parallelworlds · #4 (**permalink**) 08-19-2004, 11:15 AM

how about something like this?

http://yodadrive.mypsh.com/drives/pa...athickgrad.jpg

Thanks again,
Anthony