Review of my site

[napomom]

Okay frustration has set in. I recently revamped my website based on many comments i have found in here.

We recently changed our name from future product gifts to the gifts worth giving. I am still using www.futureproductgifts.com as my main site until I can get www.thegiftsworthgiving.com site ranked high. I currently have www.thegiftsworthgiving.com redirected to point to www.futureproductgifts.com

My questions....should I just get rid of www.futureproductgifts.com? Is this hurting me in anyway with the search engines. I was ranked 30 under the term "gifts" but have since disappeared. I purchased webposition gold years ago and recently changed the site based on what the page critic was telling me, but it hasn't seemed to help, if anything it has dropped me on some of my terms.

Should I just be patient and see what happens? I don't want to revamp my site again until I get some major feedback. I don't mind the critism either! It helps!

I appreciate any help anyone can give me.

[marketershandbook.com]

Hi,
What you should do, is find much more specific terms.

The term "gifts" is very broad, and someone searching for that term might just be researching a school project or something.

Go to word tracker.com and type in gifts in the free trial. You will find loads of other terms you can write a page about.

Try writing an article for each search term. That way you will apeear close to the top of the rankings for several search terms.
Hope that helps.

[greeneagle]

You probably should have more appropiately posted in the "Site Review" forum. Go there for a good review/reeming!

Ken