Ok, my 2 cents:
Code:
<TITLE>Petals & Lace Lingerie - Welcome</TITLE>
<meta name="keywords" content="womens lingerie, Valentine lingerie, petals and lace, lace lingerie, lingerie, sexy lingerie, bra, panties, romantic, shop,shopping, stockings, thong, lace, fantasy, catalogue, sleepwear, plus sizes lingerie, cayman islands, ">
<meta name="description" content="Petals and Lace invites you to indulge in a heavenly experience by shopping at our intimates e-store offering sexy lingerie collections in petite and plus sizes.">
seems mostly ok to me. KEYWORDS dont matter anyway (though for spam's sake I would take out those multiple "lingerie"), and the DESCRIPTION could be more to the point. Some engines show only the first x words of the DESCRIPTION in the SERPs, so you better talk straight.
The TITLE should include the word "shop", I would say. And scrap that "welcome". TITLE can have 64 characters, use that space wisely.
forget about meta "organization", "copyright" and "revisit-after". Just wasted space. Throw them out.
change "robots" from "all" to "index, follow"
"language" should contain "en-en" or "en-us" AFAIK ... someone correct me if i'm wrong.
And: put your styles in a css file.
Last thing: You got 83 (!!) errors in your HTML code, so go validate your page.
Alex