Which One?

[myvv]

I'm trying to come up with a good Title tag and I would like your opinion. Which one do you prefer and why? Also if you can think of improvements or suggestions that would be great as well. I would like to have a "call to action" or some catchy phrase to pull them in.


* Vancouver Web Development: Fast, Easy and Affordable Vancouver

Website Design



* Vancouver Web Development: Free Web Site Consultation and Free Web

Design Quote

[adore]

The second one is better for me.

[asya]

Yes, I agree. The second one sounds a lot more sensible.

[anuj_pandit1]

Hi Friend,
Second option will be better.

But try to avoid special symbols.


I hope it will help you.... *(-_-)*

[Duncan Pollock]

myvv: If my colleagues -- and you -- will forgive me for saying so, I think you should come up with an alternative to both of your title suggestions!

The first one (....affordable ...) isn't too meaningful. Affordable compared to what? Buying a new car? Going on vacation? Hiring a fulltime SEO person? Paying what the Expensive Web Development Corporation people charge?
And, in any case, how does it make you different than any other web developer who (you can bet) also claims to be "affordable"?

The second one (....free ....) worries me. Perhaps you do provide a no-charge consultation, but I rather doubt that you plan to design a website for nothing. Or is it your aim to act as a host and you'll therefore freely help people set up their website as a means of getting their business?
Whatever the case, I do think you need to avoid any hint of (what could be) misrepresentation -- and most of all in your title.

So then ....
How about deciding what your Unique Selling Proposition happens to be and then coming up with a title that encapsulates it? Examples: Websites that get you noticed. Websites that produce sales. Websites with that "special difference."

There's an old saying that you have only one chance to make a first impression. Your title needs to do that and you're quite right to worry about.
However, with all due respect, I think you need to do some more worrying!

Duncan

[Dave Hawley]

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