Thanks irodgers for your frank assessment I'd sort of come to the same conclusion about my writing skills and consequently haven’t posted it anywhere.
Instead I’ve read more and tried harder and penned a news release instead about my site.
Apparently announcing your website on some news “wire” sites can lead to some exposure, if they’re well written and interesting.
Have I improved? Or am I just wasting my time
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Kane Research creates a level playing field for large and small websites to compete.
UK based company Kane Research Limited have launched a new web service aimed at providing a list of the very best websites regardless of size, network connections or advertising budget.
Members are encouraged to submit and vote for their favourite websites using a simple “one click” voting system. Newly submitted websites appear as new releases until they receive enough votes to enter the web site charts proper.
Regular visitors can keep abreast of changes using the various sort options including last voted, latest entry and a live interactive view. Website owners are able to solicit votes by linking directly to their chart entry, not only does this provide a mechanism to raise their web site within the charts but a single vote will project an entry to the top of the last voted and the live view.
Another popular way visitors can keep their finger on the pulse is using the “tag cloud” view where frequently used tags are emphasised in a larger font.
With the introduction of this free service Kane Research hope to provide a platform for web entrepreneurs lacking the budget to compete with larger more established websites. The ability to receive this early exposure will provide a much needed breathing space for new websites to get established.
Votedtop.com has launched with 20 selectable categories: All, Auto, Blogs, Business, Career, Family, Finance, Fun, Games, Health, Home, Kids, Media, Reference, Regional, Shopping, Sports, Technology, Travel, and Web.
Roy Robinson
Kane Research Limited
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I am not sure about the title to be honest.
apparently I'm supposed to
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Use a powerful opening.
Convey your message quickly and concisely - use your headline and first paragraph effectively. If journalists were to read only that portion of your release, there should be enough information to understand what the release is about. The body of the release identifies supporting information.
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alternatives I have are
Kane Research launches a new free service allowing website entrepreneurs to compete on a level playing field with established sites.
VotedTop website charts a beacon of democracy in a web of capitalism
Votedtop website charts providing a level playing filed where web entrepreneurs can compete with the big boys