Please review my e-newsletter: www.basikneads.com/newsletter

andrewtcrane · #1 (**permalink**) 08-16-2005, 07:33 PM

Hello,

I have been too swamped with work to log on too much.

If you get a chance, please check out the BasiKneads Catering e-Newsletter. I just finished developing it and plan on sending it out on Thursday. This is one tool that I use for viral marketing.

The page www.basikneads.com/newsletter/index.html gets e-mailed to over 1500 subscribers. The reader can then click on one of the links to open up the site.

The newsletter is also linked to the home page www.basikneads.com.

All feedback will be appreciated greatly.

Thanks!
Andrew

**ctabuk** · #2 (**permalink**) 08-17-2005, 08:30 AM

Hi, I've done a report on the website. I chose the keywords 'Wedding Receptions in Washington DC' as I thought it relevant and it highlights your many competitors. Please post back your thoughts. I'm no expert on Blogs so I leave that to others more qualified. David

lloydienames · #3 (**permalink**) 08-19-2005, 10:42 AM

Hi there,

One thing I noticed with the newsletter is that it doesn't fit on a smaller sized screen very well.

It needs to be made so it'll fit on pretty much any sized screen :)

Cheers,
Amie

Gorgias · #4 (**permalink**) 08-19-2005, 03:55 PM

Hello, I think you've certainly developed an attractive newsletter. If I understand correctly, you are sending this via email? If so, you may want to switch the "subscribe" link with a "forward this email" link. If you're 1,500 recipients are already members chances are slim that they'll sign up again! Also, I would advise a straight vertical layout instead of a two-column approach. I could potentially see this wreaking havoc in some email inboxes. Also, you don't really have a greeting. How about a "hello, remember me?" of some sort? Good Luck.