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Old 12-03-2003, 05:18 AM
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Hi, I'm new here. Please review my website, and tell what can I upgrade on it - http://www.artavd.com ,Thank's
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Old 12-03-2003, 06:14 AM
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A splash page (with enter button) leading to yet another splash page (with yet another enter button).

Gadget: 1, Work Solution: 0

I would love seeing a creatively unique business proposition of your vision. Even if it is animated with informative infographics which make my bandwidth connection beg for mercy. No inforgraphics, no solutions articulated with precise benefits, no real diagrams of any kind -- just cute. You could talk about your cross-functional team of usability, technology, and design people, unique work processes or communication techniques, and so on. ...Didn't. Gadget: 2.

Process FAQ page was good, informative, tells you what you get and when. Work Solution: 1, Gadget: 2.

Awkward wording "...after a create process" -minus .2, "...with minds open to the ideas of new economy" - minus .2, "We offer the Unique Visual Design which is based on a Flash" - minus .2 Normally, unless the text was upside down and backwards, I would barely have noticed. On this site there was so little text that these seemed more pronounced than it would be with article length pieces. Content is apparently not really king.

Little stick figure with cartoon balloon. Gadget: 3. Essentially this is a HTML style site ...done with Flash, which could technically be a gadget number four. So Gadget: 3 or 4, work solution: .4
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