Flash site designed with MX 2004

[sxd]

Hi
This is my new portfolio site designed with Flash.

http://www.systemxdesign.com

Comments appreciated,
Thanks,
Robin.

[voodooboy]

OK Robin, Quick run-down.

Home page: no ";" in your tag line. It is not used that way.

Portfolio: Text is too small to read. I can read it is I get close enough but even then it is fuzzy. Would suggest going up a point size. The navigation is very confusing. I understand the concept, but for the average viewer, you will lose them. And if you decide not to change it, then you need to reverse Warner music and annual leave as they are backwards compared to everything else.

Pricing: The middle one is completely unreadable with that background.

Extras: Updates is misspelled, inquire is misspelled, there is an extra space between "an existing" and the MX animation and text animation samples are too light.

Hosting: Everyone else offers complete details on their site. I would suggest a link to a static page with details instead of forcing contact. People won't contact you for that kind of info when they can get it at other sites.

Hopes this helps. Overall great job.

Best of luck.