Please review my sales copy

[handcrafteduk]

Hi everyone,

I've been using google adwords for a while and have been getting very low sales. I believe i have set everything up okay, so I am now thinking it could be my sales copy?

I was wondering, if I post a few links here, could some of you take a look and give me feedback on the sales copy? I'd REALLY appreciate it!

Ok, for the keyword 'Buy Bongo Drum' the landing page is: http://www.handcrafteduk.com/musical...ms-c-4_24.html


And, for the keyword 'Buy African Instruments' the landing page is: http://www.handcrafteduk.com/musical...bal-c-4_5.html

Thanks so much,

Gary :-)