Before everyone holds forth an opinion, the truth is the more variables the harder it is to pin down a cause. Adding some photos could be a good step one. However, if that doesn't work, Step Two would be to make the bali site as much like the indonesia site as possible.
This way you are more likely to be testing the content, not the layouts and/or navigation.
If you can get photos and text roughtly similar to the higher conversion site, you have what's called a baseline. It may just be, amongst visitors to the sites, indonesia has better name recognition.
That said, I rather like the balivillas.com copy.
You are to be applauded. Most site owners will never test their content. Or if they test, they won't test in any meaningful way. Yet they'll redesign without so much of a reason that they are bored with the site. With a few exceptions for the more poorly designed sites (both of yours are quite good looking) content testing has the greatest chance for payoff.
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