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Originally Posted by weegillis
There are at least two incomplete sentences in the opening post for this thread... can you spot them?
Then there is a comma where no comma is required, and a comma preceding a complete phrase (should be a semi-colon or a period).
Either my browser butchered your article, or you did. So your point is...?
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You're right, the forum thread posting had potential grammatical quandries. It is a forum thread and doesn't matter as much.
I took license with the fragments (at least I was a aware of them) for that reason. The comma usage is a personal preference but is not incorrect. Some style books would require a comma there for a series. Others do not.
Yes, a semicolon should have been used between "reader" and "it."
However, I really do think in a forum thread, it's not as important, especially in the gray areas that make the proper absolutes of punctuation. Style is always an allowance as well, so fragments in a forum thread are forgivable.
But my article (i.e. not the forum post), should be clear as far as those issues go, aside from where mistakes are intentional for stylistic reasons. And I wasn't too persnickety about it, acknowledging that ending sentences with prepositions is now an acceptible practice, because of the awkwardness factor.
If you find errors in the article, please point them out, as I would be quick to correct them and appreciate where I can improve.
I understand that, on the Internet, I'm a minority when it comes to my preference for more proper writing.
And it really doesn't matter, as long it's not your professional online appearance. Having sloppy grammar and spelling on your website promotes the same message as an employer receives when a job seeker shows up for an interview in sandals, smacking bubble gum.
Just my two cents
And yes, it must have been your browser that butchered my article -- either that your own perception.