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Old 07-09-2004, 11:59 PM
calebtheredwood calebtheredwood is offline
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Loads good, looks good. I like how short the intro is. I'm getting sick of clicking 'skip intro' all the time. The only suggestion I have is that if people are going to trust you, you may want to let them get to know you better. Add some more personal info. Talk more about the inner company structure. Maybe thats nit-picking. It looks really professional ;)

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