If it seems like pulling teeth to get a comprehensive critique of your logo, it may be because it's really quite good. It does COMMUNICATE! The waviness of the alpha characters denotes the rise of smoke. The placement of the hookah works perfectly. It's placement doesn't in anyway make the word less readable.
The only negative criticism I have is that there just might be too much empty space within the oval. Doing the "tighten-up," if only even just slightly, might improve the overall balance of the graphical design elements.
You're most likely quite certain that your logo's a winner, so your comment to Bill Haig --
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Originally Posted by thehooka
Seems like you just want me to check out your website.
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-- rings a bit hypocritical to me. Posting a really good bug for review is a sure invitation for us to speculate that you've very likely done the same thing that you accuse Bill Haig of having done. There are two easily detectable types of posters on this forum: those that know they're good and want to crow, and those that have sincerely compared themselves with their competition and found their site to be lacking. IMO, You might be seen by some to fall within the former category.