The stork element is excellent. The 'picture my baby' is all lower case. I would like to see it with the P...M....B capitalized just to compare. The subtext regarding beautiful portraits from the comfort of your home is excellent however it looks like you have light grey text on a slightly darker grey background. To me grey is always a 'cloudy day' / 'stodgy' color, but with respect to the subtext, you definitely need a better contrast there, the current text is difficult to read.

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