"Beer for Stories Giveaway!” doesn't mean much to me. How about
"FREE Beer for Your Stories!"
No one cares about your database problems. So how about
"This site is new! It is about beer, beer and more beer! And everything to do with drinking.
Submit your stories and comments to get the ball rolling and WIN BEER."
What are people searching for to find your site? Have you optimized it for that? This looks like it will be fun by the way!
