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Old 10-05-2003, 03:13 PM
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If I were a potential customer, I would like to see the benefits before deciding to purchase. All I see from your site's Flash presentation (apart from fly-in and out graphics) are random statements such as "affordable", "reliable" etc. I would like to see what your product(s) could offer me... how will they make an impact on me or my company. To be honest I couldn't see what you were selling.

If you can improve on those initial statements, the whole presentation will then make more sense. Also I would definitely agree with a previous post on the need for a 'Skip intro' button

Paul
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