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Old 09-05-2008, 05:27 PM
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Default Re: Please review my site

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Originally Posted by williemanillie View Post
Dump the flash. No good for rankings.
Cannot agree with that. The Flash here is more like a large image. And there is plenty of copy underneath. If anything the image is on the large side.
The site looks very professional if a bit cluttered for me (but I ain't no designer).
Couple of markup errors related to the swf file but these are minor.
Of course, you need some more relevant page titles - "About Cast" is just a waste of time - and pages need descriptions in metas.

There is one thing tho. Once you are in the site the "home" page appears to be diffetent from the index. How odd.

It is not really clear what CAST lighting is. Lights, light fittings or what? The large splash, takes the eye away from the text so maybe something in the splash that hits the punter with what the product is and a call to action. Ask yourself, what is the reason to go to next page.