Ok. here goes.
Some of the crticisms that you made to Dave yesterday apply here.
This is a high end market you are pitching at so you need to be at least as professional as the best out there. What makes your offering so special - USP and all that.
A lot of work needed on
SEO. Think about what folks are going to be searching for. Yacht Charter Greek Islands/Greece/Med have to figure large in any page titles, descriptions etc. These all need to match up too.
None too sure about the right hand menu - very basic.
As for content, the page about Corazon needs more images - interior, accommodation, cabins etc. I appreciate that you haven't got these yet - but gallery probably not enough.
Remember that not everyone who is looking to charter will know what a Beneteau 50 is far less looks like - not all of us are sailors.
Go look at dreamsailing.com - not a great site but it is something to use as reference.
I have had a quick look at competition and their sites are not great but if you are to break into this market, you need to stand out from the crowd.
Prices? I didn't see any and I would want to have at least a guide. I mean are we talking £10,000 per week or £5,000?
The logo's colour is too close to that of background - doesn't really stand out.
At least the html validates!
Much to do yet but good luck - it is a busy market especially when
www.syconcerto.com is in your neck of the woods.