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Old 08-11-2008, 02:09 AM
chiron chiron is offline
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Default Re: Business for Sale Landing Page

Would recommend CSS to identify a link with onhover action (underline, change color, something) and would remove all underlined blue text that is not a link.

Transparent GIF will help the "SOLD" and checkmark images blend better.

The call to action is pretty far down the page, and again due to link confusion, is not entirely clear. I'd "presume the sale" and have a clear "click here to place your ad" button or link at the top, replacing the rather low-key "Upload Your Business for Sale NOW!" with text more in the theme of "Begin Selling Your Business Now!" or whatever seems to most clearly and invitingly present the offer to a prospect. Check marks table seems a bit larger than is necessary?

Edit: Those 36kb images could probably be 5kb, doesn't matter much, but helpful if you are on a metered host or have prospects likely to be on anything but broadband.

Cheers.