Re: Please review this site
Agree with the idea to get rid of the bushes in the snow. What's that adding? Also, the repeated use of exclamation points is a turn off. Obviously, we've got some English as a second language problems in the text, especially that all-important first paragraph, as well as the about us "You can order products with a direct delivery to your home via our website and reward a nice shopping experience."
Have a native English speaker proof all of this for you. In the United States, we put a hypen between the first three and last three phone numbers - 201-963-4588.
But for the most part, the graphics and layout are pleasing. It wouldn't take much to make this a real winner.
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