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Old 05-22-2008, 10:49 AM
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Default Re: Please review this site

Looks good! I noticed four possible design problems:

1. I agree that the bushes make the page look too cluttered.

2. You might want to make your name stand out more.

3. In your tagline it says, "The world's online marketplace for battery!". It think the correct grammer would be, "The world's online marketplace for batteries!"

4. In my opinion, there are too many things trying to get the visitors attention. You need some more white space.

Really though, you site is very well done. What shopping cart are you using?
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