Debbie
My one overriding comment would be to put it in an html container and fix the maximum screen size (to cater for 800x600 resolution).
I use 1600x1200 and when any Flash animation goes that big the animation is far less smooth than you'd expect.
When I resized my browser it looked much better in terms of animation, which was much smoother.
Other than that I liked the intro and I reckon it will work as long as you allow a skip function.
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Sualdam
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