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Old 05-10-2008, 09:45 PM
MattE MattE is offline
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Default Re: What am I doing wrong no sales

Given the advice that has been given already - all of it good stuff, but looking at your site, have you used any of it yet??

Gliders - I thought it referred to real sized gliders, but then see it is about model gliders.

There is a LOT that needs redoing.

Looking at your content - the intro currently is a bit demeaning to fliers I would think.

Start by working a new site structure on a piece of paper - think about all the content you can have and the logical ways it can fit together.

Then write the pages, always with a problem that you are solving in mind, and then towards the end intro your product as the solution.
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