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Old 05-07-2008, 03:49 PM
DavetheJerk DavetheJerk is offline
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Default Re: Please Review my site www.DaveTheJerk.com

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Originally Posted by arthurakay View Post
where exactly is the gap of space? i see some near the bottom in both IE and Fx.

But, on with my analysis...

1) What's the point of your website? I've been looking at it for like 2 minutes, and I still have no idea.
(That's a rhetorical question, by the way...)

2) The word-cloud thing on the lower-right just doesn't fit. I'd remove it.

3) Can I assume you used DreamWeaver or some editor to write your code?
The source code looks terrible when I view it in a browser.

4) Speaking of code... you've got 169 errors when put through the W3C validator. And you wonder why things
don't display correctly between Fx and IE?

5) Why exactly do you have Google ads on your site? Your site has no real purpose
(i.e. you're not selling anything or talking about anything in particular)
I actually find it amazing Google approved you to display the ads in the first place.

Basically, I'm telling you to find some direction. Is this a blog? Talk about something SPECIFIC. If you do that, the site will immediately be a lot better.

But also check the W3C errors... it will be a great learning experience for you to see why various parts of your code are not working.
fixed a bit of the gap space, my site is a blog where i just talk about random shit #2 has been done yes on number #3 what should i use #4 didnt know #5 well to get money

Its a blog but about nothing in general just me being a jerk and spewing out random thoughts.
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