Re: landform part deux!
Your first design was more memorable and unique. This one looks like your settled on being just one in a crowd of millions(websites) rather than stand out and set the trends in your industry.
It is clean & simple but on the downside it is quite unremarkable.
The photographs look good but composition is too much from YOUR perspective. You should include the other elements of the big picture. Lanscaping is not an element of it's own it is there to enhance and compliment the architecture of its surroundings. This is where I think Dave's "more photos" suggestion was going.
You may also want to add some personality to the site by adding some photographs with a human element(you).
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