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Old 12-21-2007, 03:18 PM
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Default Re: Need your input

Thanks for getting rid of the pop ups ...

It's been more years than I want to tell since I considered buying prom shoes so I am not in your target age group ... but these graphics do not appear to me to be something my nieces would get excited about. The clip art silhouettes and the font of the logo look old fashioned to me ... the silhouettes look more like a couple saying vows than prom night ... I'd like to see something more modern ... maybe using a young couple, the girl's stepping out of a limo with a beautiful strappy prom sandal on her foot ...

Your tag line: One Night in Time A Lifetime of Memories ... what if you changed that to:
One Night in Time A Lifetime in Memories ... it would have a little more symmetry, perhaps ... just a thought ...
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