Re: Need valuable comment for my site to make better.
You have two horizontal google banners, a google link ad and a 300x300 google ads box all above the fold. Lose at least two of them, probably the 728x90 banner and the google link ad for sure.
You have to get someone fluent in english to rewrite this. It is clear that person is not you.
"Word of mouth referrals and ads posted in magazines and directory (directories) simply confirm the lawyer is affluent enough to pay for the cost of the advertisements". (are you serious here? This is the crux of any business, I am an attorney and I make my living off of word of mouth referrals, further, they are not paid for)
"We would advise you to spend little time while filling the column where we have requested you for a brief description" - Horrible. You want the person to spend little time filling in a form? I would want them to spend the right amount of time presenting all of the facts to the attorney.
This sort of thing goes on in every paragraph on the site. Very bad english.
Finally, WOW, promoting a legal based site that is chalk full of stolen content and copyright infringement? Smart move.
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