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Old 12-11-2007, 11:22 AM
Paul B Paul B is offline
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Default Re: Ecommerce Website Review

From the fact that you quote prices in £ - assumed GBP - I guess you are in the UK. The 'About Us' page tells me nothing and it is barely understandable.

The site is short on text and explanation and the explanation you have is in some very odd English:-

"Lets stop decrypting that language which sounds more like a machine to each one of us, customers are attracted towards ease of use, rather

than by using the complication tactics to make things sound more meaningful and HEAVIER. The keywords which WE use to represent your web pages are optimized in the sense the least knowing customer gets the underlying point and needs not THINK OVER FABRICATED keywords, just before absorbing the search results."

You are either not a native English speaker or used Babelfish. Either way it will be off putting for potential customers. Likewise "Advance Business Solutions". Unless 'Advance' is a company name it should be 'Advanced'.

The design elements are OK by themselves, but together you site looks like bits of other sites hobbled together. You have two menus in different styles. Why? The graphic boxes on the left under the menus seemed to be designed by a different person that the rest of the site.

If you are to offer web design, you have to have an impeccable site...