This site looks more like either a adwords site or a site with adwords and content. Are you trying to be a myspace or I am not sure what. Sorry to be so brutal. Your only pictures are of one person. Is that you? Tone it down.

Oh and the thing that stopped me from really looking around was not all the ad of things you were trying to sell, but your logo.

Its “You're” and there is no space between the "e" and the apostrophe. Also you have the apostrophe backwards. That jumped right out at me.

Good luck with your site.

Michael

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