I like your original design and #3
jeffconcept3
Someone said the designs looked templated... hmmm maybe, maybe not. Opinions vary.
As a Virginia web company owner myself I have discovered some of my web business come from people who have browsed the designs on my site. So presenting your client web work on the homepage is a good idea.
Your site interior pages did not show many client sites or (examples). Website clients will want to see YOUR WORK.
Since we develop ALL custom sites I not only post links to the finished sites but also links to all my clients 'design proposals'.
(We call this our Design Gallery) Clients commented that they loved seeing different concepts we proposed for any one website.
And of course the client never chooses our favorite...they often chose our least favorite. Like I said before... 'opinions vary'.
Posting both live sites and design proposals gives my visitors a good idea about our wide range of creative and variety of styles. So if you are just beginning to build your client base, post your conceptuals. Give your audience some eye candy.
Cheers,
Rick