Re: Please review http://www.SpineCarePro.com
I agree with Dave Barnes too.
The site looks professional and is better than many chiropractic sites I've seen.
The text on many of the pages seem "dense". Even on a 17" screen, there are long line lengths and not much white space. It's informative, but not interesting to read. There's nothing here that tells me why I should choose your services over any of your competitors.
Marketing experts suggest that you should "know your customers pain" and show them how you can solve their problems. Your potential customers are literally in pain! Make sure they know that you understand that and can solve the problem. Testimonials might be good too.
Figure out who your audience is and find a writer who can rewrite the basic material to speak to that audience. If you are looking for good search results, find and writer with web experience.
Also if you are looking for search results, make sure you list good geographic terms. You mention Novi and Oakland County. Are there other town names you are targeting? If they aren't mentioned on your site, you won't be found if someone types in "chiropractor name of town". You can add a small service area section to the bottom of several pages or even a few town names in the footer of your page.
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